I wish my wife would bring me a beer and tell me to "earn" it. Anyways, this is definitely a tale I would have read 8,000 words of but hopefully this is an ongoing adventure series to follow. The humor and back-and-forth kept it humming like a death blade.
Interesting and entertaining! I'm impressed he cut his story in more than half, that's a big deed! I like the character concept and would read one more of his tales to see if he grew into his actions or just continued to allow them to happen.
I wish my wife would bring me a beer and tell me to "earn" it. Anyways, this is definitely a tale I would have read 8,000 words of but hopefully this is an ongoing adventure series to follow. The humor and back-and-forth kept it humming like a death blade.
Interesting and entertaining! I'm impressed he cut his story in more than half, that's a big deed! I like the character concept and would read one more of his tales to see if he grew into his actions or just continued to allow them to happen.
Definitely on the humorous side. I would be interested to see more.
I told him I'll be on hiatus through the end of the year, but he'll likely send me a second story when I start up again. So we'll see!