These kinds of endings work well every now and then...and since I hadn't published a story with this kind of resolution twist yet, I thought, why not? Gotta love the vengeful spirit trope!
Appreciate you reading the story and commenting. I've not read any of Adam's stories before and I think he's fairly new to the scene, but this one captured my imagination.
This was definitely a nefarious and tense read, enthralling. Much to lament. I will admit that I feel there is a bit left in the air about what is going on, but it was a spooky fun read.
Great opener like you said! Interesting story that kept things anxious and exciting until a rather rushed and abrupt end.
True. A bit more denouement might have given the story a different kind of punch. Thanks for reading!
Enjoyed that. Dark, gritty and atmospheric. And that ending...ouch!
These kinds of endings work well every now and then...and since I hadn't published a story with this kind of resolution twist yet, I thought, why not? Gotta love the vengeful spirit trope!
It worked for me!
Interesting. Dark and eerie. Well written.
Appreciate you reading the story and commenting. I've not read any of Adam's stories before and I think he's fairly new to the scene, but this one captured my imagination.
This was definitely a nefarious and tense read, enthralling. Much to lament. I will admit that I feel there is a bit left in the air about what is going on, but it was a spooky fun read.
I actually had to read it through a couple of times to realize what the necromancer was doing! But yes, the concept was dark and disturbing.