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David Perlmutter's avatar

It reminded me an awful lot of C.L. Moore's Jirel of Joiry stories- and that's meant as a compliment.

Lyn Perry's avatar

Cool! Appreciate you reading this.

Matt Hilton's avatar

Very good. I enjoyed that very much.

Lyn Perry's avatar

Sweet! Thanks for reading and commenting. I enjoyed it too. ;-)

Andrew Hale's avatar

I can hear a haunting harpsichord in the distance with a troll-teasing corpse playing guitar while another corpse moans out harmoniously "don't play with me, cause you're playing with fire" by the Rolling Stones. The blossoming unknown warm magic within Raisa may come to fruition but Hart's heart really went into the devastating landscape of riddled bodies and the almost humorous but entirely grim burrow of a hungry troll. Great roundups from Mr. Perry.