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David Andrew Riley's avatar

Brilliantly vivid story.

David Carter's avatar

Yes! Who doesn't love a good Viking story⚔️

Charles Allen Gramlich's avatar

Excellent tale. I felt like I was there. Who knows, maybe I was. :)

Lyn Perry's avatar

Could be! ;) Thanks for reading.

Richard Fisher's avatar

Good stuff! The lightning scene was curt, but cool. Adrian Cole had a similar scene in Arminius, Bane of Eagles. If you haven’t read it, it is a modern classic

Lyn Perry's avatar

It's on my TBR pile.

Andrew Hale's avatar

I expected some limb cutting but did not realize such a sincere exploration of fate and romance would make an appearance. Nice. Now I want to see how it goes for a warrior-poet cowboy named Bob in Carpathia.

Lyn Perry's avatar

Teel knows how to balance themes and pathos, that's for sure!

Lyn Perry's avatar

Thanks for taking the time and interest to read through these stories featured in Swords & Heroes eZine!